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28 September 2009 @ 09:00 pm
I Want You  
Title : I want you
Genre : Romance, fluff, friendship, angst
Rating : PG-13
Pairing : Taecyeon(2pm) x Sunny (SNSD), Sungmin (Super Junior) x Sunny (SNSD), more to come
Characters : 2pm, 2am, Super Junior, SNSD
Summary : Taecyeon is a normal guy who gets good marks, and works to pay off his own schooling. He’s not that rich and supports himself. One night, in his part-time job at the club, he spots this girl and immediately falls for her. She’s rich, cute, and flawless. She’s nothing that Taecyeon can get his hands on though. How will these two realize that social status and money doesn’t matter? How will they fall in love?
Warning/Note : This takes place in the middle of the story, so if you get confused sorry about that ^^; . This is my first time writing a Korean fandom kind of fic, so be gentle! I’m not as good as many writers, but If you are interested, please read : D


I Want You – Prologue

He grabbed her wrist then pulled her body into an embrace. He then locked it with his strong arm, not wanting for her to run away this time. Oh, how much he craved just to hold her like this.


Although this was the only way to tell her, he wanted to embrace her anyways. Her embrace, for some odd reason, was different from hugging just anyone. As he held her this close, he felt like he was soaring up high into the sky. It’s like there was zero gravity all around them. It’s as if there was no sky limit, he flew higher and higher.


He thought it felt nice. He loved how she fit perfectly in his arms, how her face was buried into his chest, how he can smell her cherry scented body mist that she must’ve sprayed on earlier. He wondered to himself how this could feel so right, but yet be very wrong? But that didn’t matter right now; what mattered was that he had her in his arms finally, and he enjoyed every essence of it.


Sunny realized what was happening, and suddenly started to fight back by trying to push him away. Yet he wouldn’t budge at all. She started to struggle to get out once more, but failed the second attempt. It’s because whenever she tried freeing herself from this beastly hug of his, he squeezed her even tighter.


“Listen to me!” he shouted.


Sunny became silent. Although she didn’t want to see or speak to him now, he had the right to say something. Sunny became attentive, and let him proceed.


“You always ran away from me, so you gave me no choice but to force this.” His voice became softer despite his rough and husky voice. He loosened his grip and let them part a little bit so they had a fair amount of distance to look at each other. She slowly departed from his chest that she was against, and slowly lifted her head to look into his eyes.


He stared at her with those sharp, seductive eyes that he had. She felt shivers go up and down her spine. Those eyes got to her once more. She saw something different in them, but she didn’t know what.


She gulped and just starred right back.


“I love you.” He said.



The End of Prologue



A/N: For the characters: I don’t know how these people are written in fics, so please understand that this is my first time writing about them >.<


Thoughts, comments, criticism are welcomed ^^ I really need you’re guys’ feedback on this! Please comment, I want to know if I should continue or not!

 
 
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Ramadiiiramadiii on September 29th, 2009 04:49 am (UTC)
This was awesome!!! xD I SO wanna read this story, so please keep writing this <3

Thank you so much for posting this ;)
oxokawaiioxoxokawaiiox on September 29th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC)
:O whoaa! didn't think that anyone would comment on this xD thank you!

And yes I will coninue this ^^

Thanks for reading &nd commenting~!
Ramadiiiramadiii on September 29th, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC)
Of course I would comment, sweety ;) I always comment on things I like so you'll be seeing much more of me in time *hihi*

Take care <3
oxokawaiioxoxokawaiiox on September 29th, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
awehh! thanks for reading then~

so long~~ ^^
sweetcravingssweetcravings on October 2nd, 2009 06:48 am (UTC)
awsome!
YAY! THANKS FOR THE SUNNY-LOVE! lol

SUNNY rarely makes her appearance in fanfics..
i'm glad shes the main character here!

cant wait for your next update !

woohoo
teletubies_smesteletubies_smes on October 2nd, 2009 04:15 pm (UTC)
Re: awsome!
Oh yep, TaecSun love for our dear Sunshiners
How could i ignore this wonderful fic ?

Prologue is nice.Keep up
I'll be stalking =))
oxokawaiioxoxokawaiiox on October 3rd, 2009 01:33 am (UTC)
Re: awsome!
hehe,ahh! another TaecSun lover ^^
You're comment reaally makes me happy : )

I will!
see you in the future chapter ; )

Thanks for reading &nd commenting~!
oxokawaiioxoxokawaiiox on October 3rd, 2009 01:31 am (UTC)
Re: awsome!
oh reaally? LOL never knew that she wasn't :O
haha then I'm glad that i'm writing her as a main ; )

Thank you for reading &nd Commenting hun♥
cinnabun11cinnabun11 on October 9th, 2009 09:28 pm (UTC)
aah! I'm excited for the next one!!
oxokawaiioxoxokawaiiox on October 10th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
^^ glad to hear!
Thanks for reading &nd commenting~!